Miss I's Writers Corner

Directions:

Pick a paragraph and write it correctly.  Correct the layout, spelling, grammar and punctuation.  Use lined paper to help you.  And ask an adult if you have trouble.  Have fun and good luck!!!

Paragraph # 1

Editing: How many mistakes can you find?

Cleaning Up

One day i help my next-door neighbor clean up his backyard we raked and put

leaves in blue bags to recycle tham. then we sawed some branches off of a

tree that was leaning againt the hous After we worked in the yard all afternoon,

we sat down on his bak porch and had lemonade I felt good that day because I

helped my neighbor.

Paragraph # 2

Editing: How many mistakes can you find?

Camping

i went camping with my family. We whent fishing and I caught a big

fish. I also whent Swimming with my brother. We hade a camp fire every

night. The camping trip was lots of fun

Correct Answer to Paragraph #1

Correct Answer to Paragraph #2